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In both Melbourne and London, there are many nationalities. Both Melbourne and London have many nationalities.
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Melbourne and London are both famous cities. Melbourne doesn’t have a Big Ben.

__Some linking words can be used at the start or in the middle of the sentence:__ While/whereas/although Melbourne has around 4 million people, the population in London is about 8 million. Melbourne has around 4 million people, while/whereas/although/but the population in London is about 8 million.

__“However” is used differently:__ Melbourne has around 4 million people; however, the population in London is about 8 million.

__We usually use a comma when linking words are at the start of a sentence:__ Furthermore, In addition, Moreover, Therefore, In contrast, To illustrate, For example, For instance, After that,

Library excursion essay example:

Libraries around the world differ in various ways. This essay will compare the REW ILC and the RMIT Swanston Library.

 There are several noteworthy similarities between the ILC & Swanston Library. Firstly, they are located close together. Both are in Swanston Street in the centre of Melbourne. In addition, both are on the fifth floor. Secondly, some facilities are the same. Both places have books, computers, printers, photocopiers, newspapers, study tables, and space for quiet reading. Thirdly, both libraries are used for study and research, by people who want to improve their knowledge.

 On the other hand, there are some significant differences between the two libraries. The most dramatic difference is size. The ILC is just a few rooms, with a small collection of books, whereas the Swanston library is enormous, with thousands of books on numbered shelves. Another difference is the range of facilities provided. To illustrate, the ILC just has a reception area, one computer room, and a quiet reading room. However, the Swanston Library has a great variety of extra facilities including two seminar rooms, six group study rooms, a rare books room, TV information screens, and I.T. support.

In conclusion, the two libraries are similar in regard to location, the purpose of use, and the basic facilities, while there are clear differences in size and the range of facilities.

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 * · There are many people said that the books the best way to learn at the classroom.
 * · You can store your old homeworks, next ten years ago, you want to review them again. Your homeworks are still good.
 * · Inaddtion, paperbook is much expensive than e-book.
 * (Body paragraph 1)
 * · Use computer and internat can searching a lot of information
 * · I totally agree with the products such as junk food, sigarettes and high sugar drinks.
 * (introduction paragraph)
 * · Using computers in a class is save times.
 * · Everything becomes modern. For example education.
 * · (Thesis statement) In my opinion, I disagree the statement that.
 * (Thesis statement)
 * · In previous, the teacher needs write something on the blackboard. It is slowly.
 * · There are more and more advertising in our life
 * · In the modern society, people living with out computers and internet.

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